Friday 24 February 2017

Swimming

                                                      🏊 Swimming🏊

WHIRR!!!!!!!! Mrs Hobbs whistle go's I dive in the pool. I could taste chlorine, and I could see Bonny-Mae out of the corner of my eye. I thought I was going to come last but I didn't I came second. I hoped out of the pool and walked back to the end of the line. 

                                          I Had Done It!!!!!!!!!! 


                                                   

1 comment:

  1. You might want to make it a little bit longer.

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